Freestyle Thread

[rhino1111]

okay so i recently started freestyling. i aint that good but ill spit some shit. i encourage people to come freestyle, beginner or expert, it dont matter!

EDIT: remember this is just for fun, dont take anything personally, its not intended to be offensive, just entertainment.

iiight, here i go....

Yo im the one you gonna see before yu die,
im the one that busts the slug between yo eyes,
i dont despise doing what i have to do,
with my crew, you fuck with us we gonna drop it down on yu.
We packin glocks, AK'S, even more,
from your perspective we got the worst shit...WE RAW.
no mistake im like a curse, making your niggahs dispurse,
when i step out the benz wagon '98 make no mistake,
i be emptying the clips from the AK's
I ending your glory days,
we some of the hardest motherfuckers around,
you on our bad side, u gonna hear the gat sound,
No matter how loud you scream, its a dead end street when fucking with me,
so learn who you fronting son, before you get yourself in a prediciment....there AINT NO COMING BACK FROM!!

 

[rhino1111]

Ite ill bust another, this is like my 6th freestyle ever. if anyone has any advice/tips so i can improve its much appreciated.

Yo..we laying back, smoking the endo
we gonna get baked, like a crescendo
flying high, skies the limit
Getting digits, fucking bitches..
We the neighbourhood hustlahss,
pushing so much grass, nikkas be wondering if i pulled it out my ass,
Im making 8 figures,
I rose above and became more then just a regular wigga,
I put shame on ya wiggas,
Im the definition of a true G,
dropped out of school at 16 and started making the green,
id rupture your spleen if you ever thought of fucking with me,
I became what i was destined to become,
A scronny whiteboy fucking nuns,
for that I guaranteed my spot in heaven,
even though im robbing 7/11's, 24/7.
Mad cash flow...you dont even know,
Im making more figures in a day, then you make in a years gross.

 

[alberts]

I fear most wack raps from fake Gz talkin thug
but still give these pussies a lot of love when IM walkin up
then fist fuck em deep, while sportin a boxin glove
I be off the top of the dome when IM droppin a poem
often Im known, YUP, coughin n blowin, til im off in my coffin alone-
in my own zone, tokin bones, throwin smoke at the Ozone\
coke in my nose? No, IM blown. Stayin blunted for leap years
when I be puffin I bleed tears, so rookies better keep clear.

 

[alberts]

okay so i recently started freestyling. i aint that good but ill spit some shit. i encourage people to come freestyle, beginner or expert, it dont matter!

EDIT: remember this is just for fun, dont take anything personally, its not intended to be offensive, just entertainment.

iiight, here i go....

Yo im the one you gonna see before yu die,
im the one that busts the slug between yo eyes,
i dont despise doing what i have to do,
with my crew, you fuck with us we gonna drop it down on yu.
We packin glocks, AK'S, even more,
from your perspective we got the worst shit...WE RAW.
no mistake im like a curse, making your niggahs dispurse,
when i step out the benz wagon '98 make no mistake,
i be emptying the clips from the AK's
I ending your glory days,
we some of the hardest motherfuckers around,
you on our bad side, u gonna hear the gat sound,
No matter how loud you scream, its a dead end street when fucking with me,
so learn who you fronting son, before you get yourself in a prediciment....there AINT NO COMING BACK FROM!!

Now a days rappers are using hella multi syllabic rhyming.. For example... Corey Gunz or Twista

a basic example would be these eminem lines, since IM sure you know his music basd on your style
"Livin a muck, never givin a fuck, Gimme the keys, I'm drunk, 'n I've never driven a truck"

keep up the practice n work on your flow n delivery..

P.s. It's Indo, not Endo ... Indo= Indoor, like Fa sho = for sure

 

[Red Robin]

I wrote this on the bottom of my bed when I was in jail, on isolation. I was extremely bored. lol

Me n snoop dog, yeah were freinds
we hang out every now and then

but thats all right
and thats okay
cuz me n lil wayne hang out every day

Dr. dre, Dr. dre?
what can I say, man
I aint talked to him since back in the day, man

i like the way this little bit sounds, it would be a good way to start a freestyle:

1 2 3 4
5 6 this a
rhyme thats about to hit you
right in the kissa

 

[rhino1111]

Now a days rappers are using hella multi syllabic rhyming.. For example... Corey Gunz or Twista

a basic example would be these eminem lines, since IM sure you know his music basd on your style
"Livin a muck, never givin a fuck, Gimme the keys, I'm drunk, 'n I've never driven a truck"

keep up the practice n work on your flow n delivery..

P.s. It's Indo, not Endo ... Indo= Indoor, like Fa sho = for sure

kk ill work on my multi rhymes and i heard metaphores are good aswell.

 

[rhino1111]

I fear most wack raps from fake Gz talkin thug
but still give these pussies a lot of love when IM walkin up
then fist fuck em deep, while sportin a boxin glove
I be off the top of the dome when IM droppin a poem
often Im known, YUP, coughin n blowin, til im off in my coffin alone-
in my own zone, tokin bones, throwin smoke at the Ozone\
coke in my nose? No, IM blown. Stayin blunted for leap years
when I be puffin I bleed tears, so rookies better keep clear.

red fish blue fish i see your crew bitch,
coming fully loaded are you ready to do this?
stacked to max leaving green and gold tracks,
you gett killed head spilled by my axe -
swift hits headed straight for your head
last motha fucka that i battled is 6feet dead
not a link in this chain thatd you call weak
i aint never stoppin what the hell is a peak
aint no limit justt gotta reach
hear me speak as ya gettin dragged roped up in a creek
rest in peace suffer defeat

 

[rhino1111]

and onelast one...

I be in my highlife stages till i die,
you sound like a washed out nikka, im not gonna lie
probably some scronny ass white boy, past his prime.
thinkin he can throw down with the new era,
my lyrics are so diabolic, the governments after me for sponsoring terror.
im on a different level,
Im insane like Cain, Ill leave ya like Able, your unable to touch my flow
the lines i spit are worth more then coke,
your lines are whack thats why your broke, ill leave ya choked,
sinking like the titanic, dont panic, Im "just" a global pandemic

 

[mouthmeetsoap]

I always wonder if I could do this but never try.

Apparently hip hop took a backseat to rap
though hip hop guides the way from the backseat with a map.
When did drugs and murder become rap routine?
You've never hurt somebody, why you acting so mean?
Leaving no dead bodies, yet biting the hand that's givin'
Respectin' those around me, and focusing to stay driven.
Starting fights with my pen, and computer keys
Write what I saw and not what he's seen.
Be careful not to look back at me
If you're somehow a star, then I'm a galaxy.
Bong lit, smooth rip, now I'm off to the books
Perfecting the style while rap perfects it's looks.

That's my attempt. Haha.

 

[alberts]

Rhino! Nice work steppin it up, with few rhymes written, you gettn better and that is what MATTERS. The popular subject matter you use is entertaining as fluck, but it can get old unless you keep it creative and/or funny. An example of this is Sean Price, like this;
I be the new chief of the 'Ville
With a gun that'll blow stew beef out your grill
Remember Rap can be all about your delivery and flowm as well. Memorize your best verse and play with the way you spit that shit ove a RZA instro Mental. good luck. Also, know that the bigger your vocab be, the more you have to rhyme with.

and damn Mouthmeet soap, for your attempt shit came raw. Ended the short free verse very doap,

Bong lit, smooth rip, now I'm off to the books
Perfecting the style while rap perfects it's looks.

perplexed from kush,
yes i push the bud in the bowl, then I pull a smooth snap,
my hits go hard, dude, move back.
Aint no nicotine, no Tar.
just sum Blue Crack, the best sticky green SO FAR.
but you knew that
so wHO dat.....?Fuck a Hump Free Bo gart.
pass the boom back before u get a broke jaw/
two smacks, your eye, blue, black.-
No, Naw, never need an extra smoker as i'm gettin older
my bud bundle's bigger than a bolder, movin to Arizona, cuz colorado, colder/
...State, my state is loco yo, I hope ya know
the potent smoke go down my open throat/
i pass out on my water bed n hope I float/
Slow it bro, one more time, before i go, one more rhyme the more you knows//
the more it grows, like pinocchio's, explore yo flows.
down right, sound like local vocal colloquials in Tokyo.
....back to the topic, my weed is dope I know.., your shit is not the bomb//
with more sticks than acupuncture and more seeds than the octamom//

So i know i don't have a wide range of subject matter.. but it's what's on my mind..

 

[rhino1111]

Rhino! Nice work steppin it up, with few rhymes written, you gettn better and that is what MATTERS. The popular subject matter you use is entertaining as fluck, but it can get old unless you keep it creative and/or funny. An example of this is Sean Price, like this;
I be the new chief of the 'Ville
With a gun that'll blow stew beef out your grill
Remember Rap can be all about your delivery and flowm as well. Memorize your best verse and play with the way you spit that shit ove a RZA instro Mental. good luck. Also, know that the bigger your vocab be, the more you have to rhyme with.

and damn Mouthmeet soap, for your attempt shit came raw. Ended the short free verse very doap,



perplexed from kush,
yes i push the bud in the bowl, then I pull a smooth snap,
my hits go hard, dude, move back.
Aint no nicotine, no Tar.
just sum Blue Crack, the best sticky green SO FAR.
but you knew that
so wHO dat.....?Fuck a Hump Free Bo gart.
pass the boom back before u get a broke jaw/
two smacks, your eye, blue, black.-
No, Naw, never need an extra smoker as i'm gettin older
my bud bundle's bigger than a bolder, movin to Arizona, cuz colorado, colder/
...State, my state is loco yo, I hope ya know
the potent smoke go down my open throat/
i pass out on my water bed n hope I float/
Slow it bro, one more time, before i go, one more rhyme the more you knows//
the more it grows, like pinocchio's, explore yo flows.
down right, sound like local vocal colloquials in Tokyo.
....back to the topic, my weed is dope I know.., your shit is not the bomb//
with more sticks than acupuncture and more seeds than the octamom//

So i know i don't have a wide range of subject matter.. but it's what's on my mind..

thanks bro, i still got alot of work to do, and yes i need to expand my vocabulary. and think of some dope methaphores.

ill get back with a freestyle after i run my missions ezzz.

 

[rhino1111]

Itee i got back from running my missions... ill bust one now.

Yo i just got back from running these missions,
ill be christenin' all yaa
listen man, your insane,
if you think im the one you want to be dealing with and your new to the game
I be dropping you short counts, then bounce,
catch you walkin home that day and pounce,
take back my ounce and whatever else you got clown,
you know how i roll,
bow down,
or youll be feelin tha toll.
(ahaha)

(Chorus x2):
We smoking on blunts, so dont front.
cause when im high you can see the anger in ma eyes, recognize the true gangsters...
the ones you tried to rob,
but we ended up shankin ya.

If you seek, to challenge our streak
you must be a fucking tweak...
fuck physical harm, my technique will psychologically rip you apart
kill your spark
and leave you in the dark, all with just one remark.
im a fuckin shark, and my flow will leave you mentally slow.

chorus x2