18nowicansmoke
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Here it is tell me what you guys think, it's for philosophy if you were wondering.
My school paper on legalizing marijuana
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loveformetal1
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Just before I read it, what year of school are you talking about?
vanbuilder2
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Why not? Save alot of headaches.
18nowicansmoke
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vanbuilder2
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Yes, I wasen't thinking before I spoke. How old are you?
18nowicansmoke
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idk? i saved it in format mode so it should work with all the kinds of words
18nowicansmoke
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I joined in august and you can see my name on here do the math XD
loveformetal1
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I gotta be honest man. You have a lot of work to do on writing. But the statement you were trying to convey remained true. Good job.
danecooksays
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it gets kinda repetitive with the phrase "legalizing marijuana" in the first paragraph. you use therefore a lot and sometimes it's out of context. try using commas instead of periods. the facts you used were really good. i'm not sure if you need to cite them or not? use pronouns instead of proper nouns, that'll help out with the repetitiveness. other than that, good job. sorry if i sounded harsh, i'm just trying to help you out.
TodayIsAGreenday
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might want to take your name off of it before you post it on here lol
its okay, definately can tell your a freshman
you say the word "argument" alot
and this sentence needs fixed
This can be proven false with this argument; the first piece of federal legislation to formally regulate marijuana was the Narcotics Act of 1914, which also regulated heroin, cocaine
college professers probably get like 50 papers on marijuana legalization a semester
its okay, definately can tell your a freshman
you say the word "argument" alot
and this sentence needs fixed
This can be proven false with this argument; the first piece of federal legislation to formally regulate marijuana was the Narcotics Act of 1914, which also regulated heroin, cocaine
college professers probably get like 50 papers on marijuana legalization a semester
18nowicansmoke
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ahaha really? ya well i know my writing sucks :-\ im a math guy heh
