The yellowing you are seeing is your girl(s) closing in on her end of life. As her flowers get closer to "ripe" the plant focuses less on chlorophyll production, and more on trying to get pollinated. Your leaves lose color but your buds swell up. On your close up there is a little damage on the fan that I may have questioned, but as close as you are to finishing I wouldn't worry.
As far as harvest, get a magnifier, min 30x, 60x is better, 100x is best, any stronger is overkill. Your trichs are your most reliable indicators. They start crystal clear, then cloud up as it matures, and finally turns a golden amber color. When your trichs are roughly 95%/5% to 90%/10% cloudy to amber you are in your prime harvest window. I start watching my trichs when about 90% of my pistils/ stigmas have changed color and receded back toward the calyx.