Meh, you seem to be influenced by modern day rap about getting with bitches and drugs (in your case weed). Rap started out as a way to express anguish and anger about the world and how corrupt it is. From political struggles, freedom of speech, racial intolerance, and personal strife; that's what rap started as and that's what it was best as. Now a days it's moved to rapping about how many bitches you can fuck, how much money you have, and how much you're into the drug game all backed with an aesthetically pleasing beat.
In my personal opinion I don't really care for it and I think you can do better even though I'm sure you put a lot into this. Take this as 'cron'-structive criticism. haha
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