Rand Freeverse!

Hey! thought i would just chill and post some free verse poetry..

feel free to comment or add in your own.

My eyes are filled with regret,
for somthing i will never forget.
You left me in a room,
with a face not happy nor bloom.
I sat surprised and like a fool
i didnt chase and ask you back.

here it is there it lies
the art of pain, we comprimised
I walk the line, thick to thin
the trips for you, i couldnt begin
The Wall was the end
your heart i was willing to defend.

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tragedy online

You thought you loved me
i knew better
You launched your emotions
only to fall
I couldnt say sorry
because im not better then them all


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Where was i?
where did i go?
i spaced out dawg
oh shit! oh no!
got work in 6 minutes
no coffee on the go
shit im still high! where the fucks that hoe?

i woke up thinkin it was saturday
to a drunken midget, lookin like al halliday
The drunken midget, damn he could fight
i barely woke up, and he was playin dub fight night!

Ran to my car, shit left the keys
motherfucker god damnit? why me!
ran to the door oh shit its locked
what the fuck? damn you drunken midget

the drunken midget came to the door
fuckin bitch god damn! what a whore
he pops a joint, lights the bitch
im in a hurry, i need a gun and a ditch!

Chill man dont worry
dont understand whats the problem
i look at him, straight in the eye
its fuckin sunday you damn goblem!(yes yes yes...)

he looks me all wierd
gives me the eye!
turns on the dvr and crys

he calls me a twat he calls me gay
after all, today was saturday..
let me in you fag and let me god damn you
hit that muthafuckin Jay!

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I walked to so i can run
to beat the end of fun
i made it so far to break down
damn..where did i go wrong?
was it the beer? the drugs
or just the pain
of walking for 2 days
you be the judge..

No offense but you kind of suck. Take a creative writing or poetry class of attend a poetry or creative writing workshop. if you are just doing it for the joy of expression then have fun, otherwise seek help from people who know what they are doing. Oh, and even freeverse needs some sort structure.

your a dick..(i can be blunt and hard as well.)

If you dont have anything nice to say then refrain from posting at all.Random freeverse doesnt mean I took the time to write it out spellcheck..

But if your going to be a dumbass and critisize on structure of a freeverse check this out for size.

• u r the omega of my heart
  the foundation of my conception of love
  when i think of what a black woman should be
  its u that i first think of
  
  u will never fully understand
  how deeply my heart feels 4 u
  i worry that we'll grow apart
  and i'll end up losing u
  
  u bring me 2 climax without sex
  and u do it all with regal grace
  u r my heart in human form
  a friend i could never replace

I like the last poem wh00p.
Poetry is an art that is very personal.
I think if you don't have anything nice to say then don't comment at all.

Its a freedom of expression in an unviolent way and I don't think anyone should be stiffled.

Its not good to stifle your emotions either.

You write on.

my favorite poster to the rescue

2pac is a good freverse writer, and i look to him as my inspiration.

Yes that is beautiful.
Thank you for sharing.

You are an untalented idiot. But like I said earlier don't plan on making a carrer out of this. If this is your way of venting or expressing yourself more power to you. All I was saying is it isn't tat good. What? You thought you would post it on here and everyone would love it because they are stoned? HAHA Take the criticism you baby.

lol?

jesus you dont quit? the last poem was by 2pac what a untalented idiot he was eh?

dont be a critic you'll get dumbfounded to easily..

poetry is the expression of ones feelings! there is no good or bad!!! if u feel like writing, write!!!

I was just talking about the first ones he put up. Like I said earlier if this is your way of expressing yourself have at it. Calm down BITCHES!

motherfuckers who dis pac
ended up getting shot
so watch wat the fuk u got

tupac was an inspiration too us all

I saw a wolf a few years back while visiting my sister in montana for christmass, it seemed so weathered yet beautiful. I wrote a poem about this wolf and his yearn for spring. well here it is anyway

-For many winters come and go
-Still I howl at the moon amongst this snow
-Transition will it not, to lush green again to hunt a flock
-Known all too well, with each passing day the bitter cold is hell
-Yet, one single sprout to the trickle of icy melt. Relinquish hope of a springful dwell

there once was a man from nantucket.

who put his dick in a bucket and fucked it