My first grow Please criticize and offer suggestions

Well I figured I would jump in this beautiful thread. I am currently on my first grow, and personally I think (and hope) I am doing well. I started by reading a book by Ed Rosenthal then dove into Jorge Cervantes' Growers Bible. Anyway, I bought two clones as a patient at a local dispensary. 1 Rascal og I believe to be sativa; 1 N.Y. Sour Deisel. I also bought the three part jungle juice nutrients. I started the clones under CFLs (1: 300 watt incadescent equivalent CFL; 3: 100 watt incadescent equivalent CFL) for the first week. Next I transferred them to my Early Bloom/Flowering Room, where they vacationed under a 400 Watt Metal Halide resort with an oscillating fan. After a week of Good Blue light spectrum exposure, in order to save money and because of space, I switched to the High Pressure Sodium bulb and begun to flower. By this time my gurls (spelled that way intentionally) a foot and a half. The pictures that I will attach and the information in my thread, are strictly for medicinal purposes only. Pic 1: brought clones home and planted in 3 gallon. N.Y Sour Deisel (Temporary disguises around her); Rascal O.G.

Pic 2: After two weeks of CFL and going under MH 400 Watt. Sour D. Rascal

Pic 3: beginning week four/and first week of flowering Intro to 400 Watt HPS. Sour D.

Pic 4. beginning of week two flower.

Pic 5. Beginning of week three flower. Sour D. Rascal
top of both Rascal budding Rascal budding. N.Y. Sour D. is Starting but slow.
will continue to update. PLEASE CRITICIZE!

looks good bro. plants looked a little stretched in the earlier pics but not as much in the flowering pics. keep it up bro. as always stay smokey

Yes when I bought the clones it was a lol stretched. I topped n bended branches to control the size and increase my bud amount. Thanks