Hey all, I have been thinking about writing for the past couple of months. I have several ideas, I think im going to include elements from the Silent Hill series, specifically Silent Hill 1 and Silent Hill 4: The Room and Room 1408 the short story / film. The story is inspired by RIU, because the main character, like myself will be a stoner. I have only just started, so ill give you a rough draft of the first paragraph, please, be gentle I am no Stephen King The details are kind of vague because I havent figured them out yet, such as the name of the City and such...



I watched closely as smoke rose from the red burning ember and drifted weightless into the sky. For a brief second forming a dense cloud with a striking resemblence to nebulae. I took a second inhale of my cigarette
and exhaled watching closely; a strong gust of wind dissappated the smoke quickly. I sighed deeply and stood to stretch; What's taking her so long? I was waiting for my girlfriend Kali to arrive and tell me good news. For the past few months my friends and I have been searching for an apartment to rent in another city; we had just put a deposit down on a promising apartment near the downtown area. I sat back down and shifted my weight uncomfortably; inhaling periodically the sharp pain in my back turned to a gentle numb sensation.


again, just a rough draft so be gentle

edit: I realize this is in the wrong forum, but I thought maybe I could get more opinions here since the Inspired art forum is basically dead right now

Cool story bro! I hope it's ready by halloween!

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I have to go pee
feel it pressing on bladder
like a stream, relief

Tight dude, your writing is good. Keep going, definitely. Hell, we should start a fiction section, but I doubt a bunch of stoners have the attention span for it... :P