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Originally Posted by pandabear i like it its great, great lyrics, what you really need is a phat beat to kick in im talking deadly southern playalistik and throw some tallented rappers in there. u gotta make it main strean to make money and reach millions here a freestyle i cobbled toghter read the rap to your song Ay yo, they wanna get you, they sending the cops whats it like to be free, I dont know where it stopped arrogance breeds, they be losing the flocks and the tighter they squeeze, the more they will drop drop drop ...drop Ay yo playa where the cash at, I dont feel shit unless i have that, They take it from me, and they takin your ass back, They say that you free, but they rapin your asscrack If you wanna see me, ill be layin in hatchback With a couple mc's, and my tech nine cocked back My tech go clap clap I bet the feds dont know that, i bet its feds who brought crack, All my freinds they all locked back, but they still smokin there laid back Untill the day that it fades black, we'll be payin them pay backs They will never get me, they can never stop the flow Whats it like to be free? nigga I really dont know Lets just keep smokin the weed, and defying these hoes, Because the more that we breed, the more we will grow grow grow.......... grow......grow.................................GRO W |
Hey man thats some great lyrics you write.
i was impressed

I cant rap at all,all i have ever done with proper lyrics was this 1 track rerecordnotfadeaway which was some lyrical samples that i had in fruity loops which i then made up a beat for and did some synth work.
I did that a long time ago and haven't really tried again since as it didn't get many listens.
SoundClick artist: nat moon - Original trance techno tribal and electronic madness.
Anyway if you want to make the lyrics that you have written into an actual recording i would be happy to make a new mix with a bit more work on it as a rerelease of your lyrical version.
I would write you up as the writer and lyricist and give you full credit but i don't as yet sell any of my tunes,mainly because i realize that they are not as yet good enough.
All i can do is use a speech synthesizer so it would be a bit crap if i did it

Thanks for the time and effort that you obviously put into writing those lyrics and for having a listen.
It is much appreciated

