Some Poetry

Crumbles · #1 06-05-2008, 02:19 AM

i twiddle my thumbs as i take a walk across the moon
im goin home soon, where its ok to be out of tune
im in bloom, thoughts drip from my chapped lips like nectar
pollinating the minds while the shine of my eye reflects her
sometimes i saw her twinkling and dancing among the stars
descending from the heavans and relishing in her scars
when she cries it rains cold, you can feel it chill your soul
when she smiles its alright, feel the sublte breeze and the sun light
i told her let me steal you, feel you, and heal you
im scared that all these broken promises are goin to kill you
she just smiled and it felt like everything was alright
the sun never shined so bright it almost blinded my sight
but i watched her die that night with the dreams of her being mine
ive watched every night since for the stars to regain their shine
i cant say that im fine, it doesn't get better with time
i join the crowded ine just looking for peace of mind.

this shits copyrighted bitches..

Manny Ramirez · #2 06-05-2008, 02:43 AM

ok..............

Crumbles · #3 06-05-2008, 02:59 AM

i get bored and creative.

I write what i please sucka XD

robberx · #4 06-10-2008, 10:46 PM

like it alot man. I used to write poetry myself but it was more bout the streets n my experiences there. I really liked the flow you had.