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I write during intense moments of boredom which is Most of my life.
When I get very bored my capacity to Daydream is intensified and I leave on short journeys in my brain which i attempt to describe Or I simply speak of my turbulent and useless little life: Comfort in the clouds heated by the sun Comfort in a daydream, on a trip to the sky’s Comfort in the smell and taste of a shine We float above the heaven that we all seek As I walk under the sea appears a man We walk to the sea floor and lying in the sand is the ship upon its unfinished path. He was young and he was old He was very,very cold Striking beauty of what is right In the snowy path of fright Lost in thought and standing on glass It's starting to crack with the weight of the task Hearing the story of the lost boy Finding my road and best fitting mask Beautiful feeling at the best sight seeing Blurry faces,blurry beings |
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sounds like one of those trips where you meet a stranger and they have an impact on you for the rest of your life... i like your writing style but i'm pretty bad with allusions and can only go so deep with metaphors so i don't understand it completely. i do like how the beggining of the first three lines were really on beat and the sense of balance your work has. keep on writing
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