I write during intense moments of boredom which is Most of my life.
When I get very bored my capacity to Daydream is intensified and I leave on short journeys in my brain which i attempt to describe Or I simply speak of my turbulent and useless little life:


Comfort in the clouds heated by the sun
Comfort in a daydream, on a trip to the sky’s
Comfort in the smell and taste of a shine
We float above the heaven that we all seek
As I walk under the sea appears a man
We walk to the sea floor and lying in the sand is the ship upon its unfinished path.


He was young and he was old
He was very,very cold
Striking beauty of what is right
In the snowy path of fright



Lost in thought and standing on glass
It's starting to crack with the weight of the task
Hearing the story of the lost boy
Finding my road and best fitting mask
Beautiful feeling at the best sight seeing
Blurry faces,blurry beings

double post
and its STILL good.
No worries. We have all double posted at one time or another.

sounds like one of those trips where you meet a stranger and they have an impact on you for the rest of your life... i like your writing style but i'm pretty bad with allusions and can only go so deep with metaphors so i don't understand it completely. i do like how the beggining of the first three lines were really on beat and the sense of balance your work has. keep on writing