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Originally Posted by ImTheDude
Not good IMO. I used to write like this a found it HORRIBLY cheesey and tasteless. I'm really am sorry but this isn't an insult it's just constructive criticism. I don't quite understand how i changed my writing but it's not entirely WHAT you're writing it's HOW your writing. Wish I could be more helpful! :-/
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That's alright, i'm not here to impress anyone, least of all a stranger who joined within the last 2 days, I mentioned at the beggining this is just a rough scribble to get my ideas down, the grammer, punctuation and flow of it have not been corrected, i've written through it as fast as possible to get my ideas down, horribly cheesy I can see, but tastless, im just trying to have some fun writing
